Using Jewel
1. [ ] They are possessed by an angel.
2. [ ] They are possessed by a demon.
3. [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.
4. [ ] They are physically strong. (She cannot fight w/o her cleaver)
5. [ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour.
6. [] Their eyes are an unusual color.
7. [] This eye color happens to be red.
8. [ ] Their eyes change color.
9. [ ] They have wings.
10. [ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift.
11. [ ] They are immortal.
12. [ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
13. [ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.
14. [x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
15. [] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc.
16. [ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc.
17. [x] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers. (not rlly powers)
18. [ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet.
19. [] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers.
20. [ ] They are a healer.
21. [x] They are from a very rich/royal family. (hER BROTHER LEADS THE STREET CATS YO)
22. [ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background.
23. [x] They have lost one/both of their parents.
24. [x] They ran away from home.
25. [ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
26. [ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death.
27. [ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature.
28. [x] They never knew their parents.
29. [x] They were abused/spoiled as a child. (Abused)
30. [x] They are very attractive to the same gender.
31. [x] They have lots of friends/no friends.
32. [ ] They are emo/cutesy.
33. [ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
34. [x] They are currently in a relationship.
35. [ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.
36. [ ] They have a mental disorder.
37. [ ] They have an emotional disorder.
38. [ ] They struggle to stay sane.
39. [ ] They are a psycho.
40. [] They have multiple personalities.
41. [x] They are very intelligent.
42. [ ] They have hallucinations.
43. [ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
44. [ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.
45. [] They have a guardian spirit.
46. [ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
47. [ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
48. [] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.
49. [] Some part of their body glows.
50. [ ] They have a rare/unusual name.
51. [ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.
52. [ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age.
53. [ ] They are connected with a certain element.
54. [ ] They are connected with a certain animal.
55. [ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.
56. [ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga.
57. [ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated/against/misunderstood.
58. [ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared.
59. [x] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives. (well uh the streets are the setting of return to innocence)
60. [ ] They are hiding from someone/something.
61. [ ] They have a rare blood type.
62. [ ] They cry blood.
63. [ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc. make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown.
64. [ ] They are from a different country to where they live
65. [ ] They are very mysterious/dark.
66. [ ] They are very lively/happy.
67. [x] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly.
68. [ ] They are very patient.
69. [ ] They are from a long line of assassins.
70. [x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear.
71. [ ] They have amnesia.
72. [ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them.
73. [ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.
74. [ ] They are 'the chosen one'.
75. [ ] They have insomnia.
Overall Points : 14
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Point Reduction ::
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements ::
1. [ ] They smoke.
2. [ ] They are an alcoholic.
3. [ ] They are overweight.
4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs.
5. [x] They have a short temper.
6. [ ] They enjoy bullying others.
7. [ ] They do not care much about others.
8. [x] They are relatively emotionless. (she pretends to be for a while)
9. [ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.
Total: -2
RESULT : 12
05 :: Anti-Sue.
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.
06-15 :: Balanced Character.
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
awwwww yiss
16-25 :: Borderline Mary-Sue.
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26 :: Mary-Sue.
Please revise your character... NOW.
